Of all the pictures in this exercise the one above is my favourite. The girl framed on the left hand side balances with the rays of the sun. I also like the image below, placing the main object on the left hand side. The main problem with the image below is the sky has lost drama. The sun went behind a cloud.
Finding a background with out too many distractions wasn't terribly easy. The sun and light has changed in this series. However for the purposes of this exercise the subject remained in the same place, thus enabling me to place her in various parts of the frame. This is another exercise I have done a couple of times, each time taking more time to think about where I want the subject to be and why.
What I do need to pay more attention to is the edges of my frame. I'm getting messy corners.
The picture above has the girl in in the centre of the frame. Your eye is drawn to this part of the image leaving dead space on the left hand side.
When I moved to place the girl in the right hand side of the frame it did not resolve the problem of empty space. Although the bollard (is that what they are called?) just sneaking in on the bottom left hand corner is a distraction that needs to be cloned out. (I left it in to remind myself to take more care when framing this type of scene. )
The same scene in portrait is not so interesting. My least favourite is the one on the far right. The girl is in the centre of the frame with roughly equal amounts of sky, water and foreground. Although this is the supposed thirds rule it really doesn't do anything for this image. The first portrait picture I think benefits from tight cropping (2nd from left), although the image is now just a dark blob. (I had chosen to make the person a silhouette and now as it is so dominant it really needs more detail. The third image would have been better if the sky had more interest and drama in it. The sun has become a burnt out corner of the image with little to offer the picture. This looks better when cropped just above the mast of the boat.